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9月12日雅思大作文真題參考范文:藝術能告訴我們什么?

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2020年9月12日雅思大作文題目:藝術能告訴我們什么

In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?  

解析&審題

題材:生活

題型:report

關鍵詞:art + science and technology + life

需要討論的觀點:藝術能告訴哪些科技不能告訴我們的東西?

建議思路:從物質、心理、社會三層次對比討論

復現情況:2011年7月16日原題

本題復現了2011年的題目,雅思官方這樣命題,也是讓人難以捉摸了!本次考試題目一出來,各雅思備考公眾號的專家大師們一片哀鴻,幾乎一致認為這次考試“太難了”。那么,這個題目真的太難了嗎?關于生活,科技能夠告訴我們什么?藝術能夠告訴我們什么?哪些是藝術可以告訴我們,而科技不能告訴我們的?

如果我們無法提煉觀點,本題的確會讓很多同學一籌莫展,但是熟悉唐老師“寫作三層次”(即物質、心理、社會)思路的同學,可能很快就能找到寫作方向,即科技只能作用于我們的物質生活,而藝術則能讓我們理解自己的內心和更廣闊的社會!沿著本思路,這個看似“太難”的題目其實相當容易。

雅思考試中,有很多“藝術”題材的作文,這里僅列舉近5年的原題。

1. Art classes like painting and drawing are important to students’ development and should be made compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2017/1/7) 藝術課應該成為高中必修課嗎?

2. Some people think any government money spent in supporting the artists such as painters, musicians and poets should be spent on more important things. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2017/9/9) 政府應該資助藝術家嗎?

3. Some people think that arts (such as painting and music) do not directly improve people's life, so government should spend money on other areas. Do you agree or disagree? (2018/5/12) 政府應該資助藝術嗎?

4. Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will be not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (2019/8/31) 電腦時代我們還需要博物館和藝術館嗎?

高分范文

Over the past two hundred years, the huge progress achieved in science and technology has significantly transformed our world, but it has never made artists such as painters, musicians, and writers unnecessary in our life. This is, in my view, because arts can give us a lot of things that science and technology cannot.

Science and technology improves our knowledge about the world by telling us what it is like, or can be like. It was Newton, for instance, who told us why objects move and stop moving, and Einstein who told us that time is the fourth dimension of space. However, science and technology cannot tell us about ourselves, or why and how we should live in the world. And this is exactly where arts cut in.

As science and technology can influence our life on the outside, arts can move us on the inside. Through imagination, a painting, poem or novel can take us to the depths of our heart and make us understand the true meaning of our existence. Anyone who has ever read Ernest Hemingway’s Farewell to Arms will be struck by the cruelty of war and the value of loving and being loved, and those who have been inspired by Beethoven’s Fifth Symphony will never give up even in times of adversity.  

Furthermore, arts can lead us outwardly to the vast world, real or imaginary, which provides us with opportunities to understand our responsibilities for the world as a whole. For example, the movie Schindler's List tells us that we, as human beings, should love, rather than hating each other, and the novel Silent Spring gives us a warning that the Earth will be destroyed if we go on polluting it the way we do now.    

In summary, though the advanced science and technology today has blessed us with a prosperous material life, we should never dispense with arts that reveal the meaning and value of that life.

老師筆記

1.Over the past two hundred years, the huge progress achieved in science and technology has significantly transformed our world, but it has never made artists such as painters, musicians, and writers unnecessary in our life. This is, in my view, because arts can give us a lot of things that science and technology cannot.

在過去的兩百年里,科學技術的巨大進步極大地改變了我們的世界,但從未使畫家、音樂家、作家等藝術家在我們的生活中變得不必要。在我看來,這是因為藝術可以給我們很多科學技術所不能提供的東西。

解析

(1)本段直接轉寫題目內容,并給出自己的觀點。

(2)Achieve 實現;取得

(3)Transform 改變

2.Science and technology improves our knowledge about the world by telling us what it is like, or can be like. It was Newton, for instance, who told us why objects move and stop moving, and Einstein who told us that time is the fourth dimension of space. However, science and technology cannot tell us about ourselves, or why and how we should live in the world. And this is exactly where arts cut in.

科學技術告訴我們世界是什么樣的,或者可能是什么樣的,從而提高我們對世界的認識。例如,牛頓告訴我們為什么物體會運動和停止運動,愛因斯坦告訴我們時間是空間的第四維。然而,科學技術不能告訴我們關于我們自己的事情,也不能告訴我們我們為什么要生活在這個世界上。而這正是藝術的切入點。

解析

(1)本段先簡單談科學技術能告訴我們什么以及不能告訴我們什么,然后引入藝術。

(2)Dimension 緯度

(3)Cut in 切入

(4)It is ... who... 這是強調句,表示“正是......做......”,大家需要掌握這個句型。

(5)這里舉例牛頓和愛因斯坦,但大家也可以根據自己的知識范圍舉其他例證。下同。

3.As science and technology can influence our life on the outside, arts can move us on the inside. Through imagination, a painting, poem or novel can take us to the depths of our heart and make us understand the true meaning of our existence. Anyone who has ever read Ernest Hemingway’s Farewell to Arms will be struck by the cruelty of war and the value of loving and being loved, and those who have been inspired by Beethoven’s Fifth Symphony will never give up even in times of adversity.  

科學技術可以從外部影響我們的生活,藝術則可以在內部推動我們。通過想象,一幅畫、一首詩或一部小說可以把我們帶到內心深處,讓我們明白我們存在的真正意義。任何讀過歐內斯特·海明威《永別了,武器》的人都會被戰爭的殘酷和愛與被愛的價值所打動,那些受到貝多芬第五交響曲啟發的人即使在逆境中也決不會放棄。

解析

(1)本段討論藝術影響我們生活的第一個方面:我們的內心。通過舉例來證明。

(2)On the outside 在外面

(3)On the inside 在里面

(4)Existence 存在;生存

(5)Be struck by... 被......打動

(6)Inspire 激勵

(7)In times of adversity 在逆境的時候

4.Furthermore, arts can lead us outwardly to the vast world, real or imaginary, which provides us with opportunities to understand our responsibilities for the world as a whole. For example, the movie Schindler's List tells us that we, as human beings, should love, rather than hating each other, and the novel Silent Spring gives us a warning that the Earth will be destroyed if we go on polluting it the way we do now.   

此外,藝術可以把我們帶到廣闊的世界(無論是真實的還是想象的),這給我們提供了機會去理解我們對整個世界的責任。例如,電影《辛德勒的名單》告訴我們,作為人類,我們應該彼此相愛,而不是互相憎恨;小說《寂靜的春天》給了我們一個警告:如果我們繼續像現在這樣污染地球,地球將被毀滅。

解析

(1)本段討論藝術影響我們生活的第二個方面:讓我們明白對世界的責任。

(2)Imaginary 想象的

(3)Provide somebody with something 給某人提供某物(注意provide的介詞搭配) 

5.In summary, though the advanced science and technology today has blessed us with a prosperous material life, we should never dispense with arts that reveal the meaning and value of that life.  

綜上所述,雖然今天先進的科學技術給我們帶來了繁榮的物質生活,但我們決不能放棄那些揭示生活意義和價值的藝術。

解析

(1)本段從三個方面提出解決辦法。在這一部分,考生應該避免連續使用...should...這樣的句式,而是應該考慮用多種方式來提出建議。

(2)Socialize with... 與......交往

(3)Events 活動;事件

(4)Solely 惟一地(= only, exclusively)

(5)Be dependent upon/on... 取決于......;依賴于......

(6)Harmonious 和諧的


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