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雅思寫作大作文范文:解決環境問題的方法

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One of the best ways to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel and all vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?20180310真題)

 

翻譯:解決世界環境問題的最好辦法之一是提高燃料和所有車輛的價格。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

 

話題:社會類-環境保護

 

類型:同意與否

 

關鍵詞: environmental problems,increase the cost of fuel and all vehicles

 

解析:

 

提高燃料和所有車輛價格一定是有一些幫助的,頻繁大量的用車會產生有害氣體(Cars are the main source of greenhouse gases and urban air pollution),汽車?的尾氣排放積少成多,造成酸雨,全球氣溫變暖等等環境問題(Car exhaust contributes to acid rain and carbon dioxide which cause the global warming and damage human health.)

 

提價會在一定程度上減少人們的車輛使用,減少燃料消耗,減少有害氣體排放,也就因此緩解了環境問題。

 

但是小編私認為,這并不能稱得上是一個best way。首先,很多商家為了繼續提高車輛售賣可能會努力尋找對付價格上升的方法(an alternative way to overcome the price rise);其次,很大程度上,這種提高價格,只會對一部分人產生影響,那些低收入者可能會感覺生活更困難(even harder to maintain their daily expenses)而對于中高收入群體,可能這一措施的影響不大,效果也并不明顯;另外,除了有害氣體排放,我們地球還面臨著一些其他類型的污染問題(Chemical wastages and solid wastages are also hazardous to the environment.),而這些問題很難由提高燃油價格車輛價格來解決(These harms will not stop by increasing fuel prices.), 因此,這個措施可以在一定程度上解決問題(This system might be useful to a certain extent in some cases.),但很難被稱之為一個one of the best ways。

 

好啦,我們來看一看今天的精選范文

 

范文分析:

 

Environmental pollution has been a major concern in todays society, and some people feel that governments should raise the price of fuel (替換題目中詞匯)to resolve this issue(注意詞匯搭配-resolve a problem/resolve an issue. In my opinion, it may help to some extent; however there are other effective solutions to tackle this problem.

 

(開頭段寫的非常棒,結構上簡潔明了,沒有多余的話。背景介紹一句進行了詞匯替換并使用了地道搭配, 引出下文一句給出了非常明確的自己的觀點,就是我覺得它有些用途,但是可能還有其他更有效辦法- 本文不是totally agree totally disagree,而是一種比較折中式的寫法,大家可以仔細研讀一下)

 

To begin with, increasing the price of petrol(題目中詞匯替換fuel-petrol- 下層詞替換上層詞) can help reduce the environmental pollution to some degree. In other words, excessive use of cars(好詞,過度使用-excessive use of sth.releases(環境話題好詞,排放氣體用release) carbon dioxide into the atmosphere which is detrimental todetrimental-..有害處,有害的,不利的) the environment. If the price of petrol is increased, individuals will start to use their cars less often and this in turn can decelerate(動詞-使減速,降低速率,我們可以在說速度speed的時候使用表示減速,或者在說經濟增長Economic growth的時候使用,表示經濟發展放緩,反義詞acceleratethe rate of air pollution. However, the increase in the cost of petrol will not continuously stop the environmental pollution. Besides, the fuel price determines the market prices of other essential commodities(名詞:商品commodity-日用品= daily necessities)  and increasing the price can affect poor and middle class families.

 

(主體1段,講明提價的作用,進行了具體的解釋-解釋論證,在結尾處進行了轉折,說明雖然有效,但不會持續一直有效,并且還會提高省會必需品價格,影響中下層人們的日常生活。本段在具體的分析這個措施的利弊,注意標黃色的字體為句間連接詞,本段的邏輯連接做的特別好,值得學習)

 

On the other hand, governments can take other measures to mitigate(使減輕,使緩和=alleviatethese problems. A better solution is to invest in renewable energy sources(環境話題好詞-可再生能源) such as wind, solar and tide(積累一下做舉例) rather than non-renewable resources like coal and petrol. For example, solar power in the United States has proven its efficiency in energy production.

 

Second, by improving public transportation and reducing the cost of traveling, the government can encourage more people to use public transport; this practice can help clean the environment and reduce traffic.

 

(主體2段,給出了一些作者認為可能更有效的方法,比如與其提價,不如花更多精力在可再生資源的開發商,與其給中下層人民帶來生活消費增高的困擾,不如大力發展公共交通,政府會更有作為)

 

To conclude, I strongly believe that the hike in the petrol price is not the best solution to this problem. Improving the efficiency of public transport and investing in renewable energy sources are better alternatives(替代性方法) that ought to be considered.

 

(如果說開頭段沒有把自己的觀點說的很明確,那么這個結尾就徹底把自己的觀點說清楚了,有理有據,并對上文提到的替代性方法做了總結)

 

這篇范文寫的真是太好了,小編真的是實在忍不住了,看到就要快點分享給大家。請大家務必好好學習,好好仿寫這篇文章哦。


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